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My Poems

Charline Whitlow Moore

Kathie & I were looking forward to our cruise

Certainly not expecting such terrible news

Yet the dreaded call was so profound

That we took the next exit and turned around

 

My brother-in-law Sammy was on the line

Saying my sister was in deep decline

Told us he was calling everyone in

That he feared Charline was near the end

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My dear sister did leave this earth a few days later

Peacefully going to meet her creator

Sole family survivor I then became

Alone to carry on the family name

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Why did Charline die before me?

That I should die first, all would agree

For all her life, she did good and was strong

While I did just about everything wrong

 

Smoking cigarette, Lord, I couldn’t get enough

While Charline never touched the stuff

Nor I was not beyond taking a drink or two

While Charline always said, “No thank you”

 

So, why is Charline in that grave?

It should be me the way I behave

Not something I can ever explain

That answer is with God and shall remain

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I remember the good times on North 3rd Street

Like typical sibs, we would always compete

Mother would cook brownies, we fought to lick the pan

Or who got to sit next to Daddy on the divan.

 

Christmas eve was something really special

Mother and Daddy took it to an all new level

After a meal fit for a king

We’d sit around the tree in a great big ring

 

Would open all our presents from each other

Admiring what we’d all gotten one another

Then Charline and I would be sent to bed

Assured that Santa was near in his sled

 

Waking long before Mom and Dad next door

We’d both huddle by the furnace on the cold floor

We couldn’t run to the tree til they were awake

So, we’d see just how much noise we could make

 

With them finally awake we would make our run

Eager to see what goodies Santa had brung

Wondering how Santa knew what we’d ask for

Only Mom and Dad knew that score

 

Ah sweet memories of a family I loved dearly

And a dear, dear sister I lost prematurely

Not so sure I like being the last

With all these memories of those who have passed

 

Might have been better if I’d been first to go

Least then there’d still be a Charline Whitlow

A person far better than me to persevere

And tackle this old world year after year
 

I miss you sweet Charline

Will join you soon

 

Your brother, Duane

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                                           by: Duane Whitlow - 2023

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Lara’s Theme

 

When simple words do not fit

Music is the only way to say it

For example:

The haunting notes of Lara’s Theme

Shout “love” to the ultimate extreme

 

When Yuri and Lara would chance to meet

Only music could go that deep

Mere words just don’t have that much devotion

Only music lets us “feel” Yuri’s emotion

 

Music is a language just like the written word

Used so feelings can be “heard”

When words just can’t quite communicate
Music is there to further create

 

Dr. Zhivago, the movie, is a tale told well

Pasternack, the author, really did excel

But Jarre, the composer, added so much more

When he wrote that haunting score

 

Oh, how I would love to compose such a verse

Something so beautiful to leave on this earth

Or write an epic story as good as can be

Then hire a composer much better than me

 

Lara’s Theme” added so much to the novel

Changing it from great to utterly colossal

Strange how a few notes can add so much

Being able to “feel” a story gives it that special touch
 

                      by B. Duane Whitlow - May 2025

Ronald Neal Echols

November 2, 1937 – April 24, 2026

 

Class of 1956! You all know Neal

He was voted wittiest in our class; the real deal

But, on the labor camp road is where he really rose to fame
Drag racers out there all knew his name.

 

Echol’s Buick Century was known well

All knew it ran like a bat-out-of-hell

But have y’all heard ‘bout Neal’s other tale

About him being locked up in a county jail?

 

It happened some years back, ten or so at tops

Neal & Ronnie Payton were to meet in Hobbs to play some slots

But driving there, Neal was challenged to a road race

And you know Neal, he won’t lose face.

 

Hey Ronnie! There in Hobbs having a ball.

Don’t hang up, for I’ve only got one call

Stop playing that slot, cause I need bail

Believe it or not, I’m in the Seminole jail!

 

No, it wasn’t Peggy Sue I passed on that hill;

Or Maybelline in her Coupe de-Ville.

It was a Gaines County deputy with his radar gun;

And believe you me, he wasn’t out there just for fun.

 

Said he clocked my corvette at a hundred and four

Disappointed me really, I thought I was doing a whole lot more.

They towed my car and put me in cuffs;

And, believe-you-me, that judge was tough!

 

Asked had I ever had a suicidal thought;

Told her no. your honor, except just now when I got caught.

Yeah, I’ll call Jan. Tell her I’ll now drive under 56;

But Ron, that’s just til I get my radar detector fixed.

 

Hey, Ronnie! you still playing that slot

Just leaving me here to rot?

Yeah Neal! I feel it’s fixin to hit;
So, I’m gonna stay here just a bit.

 

Well hurry up and hit that jackpot

My cellmates here are a real mean lot

One’s 6’4, a 300 pound guy

And he’s startin’ to give me the evil eye

 

Ronnie did drive back to Seminole and got Neal sprung

Both went right back to Hobbs and had their fun.

Jan never believed Neal’s promise to drive slower

She’s heard that line of his many times before

 

But after probation and a hefty fine

Neal did sell his corvette and tow the line.

Drives a Jeep now, thou not very fast

But, his radar detector is still there on his dash

 

For he may drive back to Hobbs yet again

and might run into his racing friend

But this time he’ll just drive slowly pass

and yell to him – you can kiss my ass!

 

Classmates, now you know what our Neal has done

how he got caught on his very last run

Now like all of us, he’s over the hill

With no more dragons yet to kill

 

Class of 56, to coin a phrase

May God bless us all in our remaining days

For some of us, this will be our last Jubilee

So, I’ll say farewell to y’all from my best friend Neal and me

 

                                        Duane Whitlow, April 2025

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                        Best Friends
    Duane                                        Neal
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Lamesa, Dawson County, Texas

 

Just a lil’ O’ West Texas town where I spent my youth

Other than that, not much of a place, to tell the truth

 

It’s a shame, but……

 

Each year I see more boarded-up stores around your courthouse square
And more weeds in front of homes in need of repair

 

Tourist….?

 

They only know you as an aging gas station with a dirty commode

Just a brief stop for them so they can get back on the road

 

And to so many others…

 

You’re very well known for your fierce sandstorms

Not for your pumping oil wells and cotton farms

 

But it is very true that…

 

When the wind picks up and your red sand blows

Is why your school’s name is the Golden Tornados

 

But…

 

I see you in a whole different way

For you see, I was one of you back in the day

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When…?

 

A teenager in the ‘50’s. That was the very best

And living in Lamesa then, I felt truly blessed

 

Why…?

 

Our Lamesa back then was a far different place

Vibrant and alive with a totally different face

 

Not a vacant store on the square could be found

All stores full of shoppers going round and around

 

But when all the stores closed for the week

It was time for us teenagers to claim the street

 

We rode around the square every Friday and Saturday night

Girls drove to the left, boys to the right

 

And when we wanted to stop and meet

We simply drove one block down to Wall Street

 

I remember places not there anymore

Like Collin’s and Baldwin’s Department Store

 

Jelly’s Barber Shop is where my hair got cut

And my family ate out a lot at The Green Hut

 

Farmer’s Bakery had the best donuts in the state

And about that time Turner’s Café invented the chicken fried steak

 

I remember Stogner’s where we boys played pool

We weren’t good, but sure thought we were cool

 

And the Sky Vue Drive-In was where I first became a man

For it was there I finally held my girlfriend’s hand

 

On Saturday we all went to the Majestic for their western show

Saw a Shoot-Em-Up, serial and cartoon, all for not much dough

 

Our heroes were Johnnie Mac Brown, Whip Wilson and Lash Larue,

Occasionally we saw Roy Rogers and Gene Autry too

 

On Sunday’s we kids were all at the Palace a block down the street

The new Hollywood color films there were pretty neat

 

For just 12 cents we could attend the show and see a color cartoon

Our parents loved it too – they were rid of us kids all afternoon

 

Lamesa, thank goodness…

 

I’ve got these good old memories of you in my mind

And I’ll enjoy them all til the end of my time

 

But when I’m gone, they will be too

One less person who remembers the good old you

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Written by: Duane Whitlow, Aug/Sept 2026

Class of 1956

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